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So if I'm gasoline
.... you must be fire?
I'm passion,
And you're desire?
I'm the reason
Earth is turning,
You're the motive,
To keep Hell burning?
So since I am the dark,
You wouldn't be the night?
But as I'm not the sun,
You'll be the light?
I'm the go,
You're the stay,
I'm the work,
You're the play.
I'm the black,
You're the white,
I'm the peace,
You're the fight.
You're the ground,
I'm the sky.
You're the innocent,
So I'm the bad guy?
You're the drought,
I'm the flood,
And the gash;
You're the blood.
I'm the numb;
You're the pain.
You're the dry,
I'm the rain.
You hold the dreams,
That create the fears,
I hold the smiles,
That make more tears.
So you're the maze
I can't get through,
And I'm the riddle,
That muddles you.

So you're everything
I'll never get to be.
And yet...
we fit together perfectly?

You're my disease,
And I'm your cure.
Like two imperfect pieces,
To complete a perfect jigsaw?

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I can't remember what complete feels like...
Is it really possible? Like, I just mean...
Never mind :D

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~ashwazhere-skw-agc May 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I LOVE IT!!!! Daisy, i swear you are a genius!!!!! This is majorly cool! Love it! =D :heart:
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:iconcecilyac:
This just fits.
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!Emotastic-chik5 Apr 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is great!
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:icondizzymac:
Thank you! I'm glad you like it. A :hug: for the fav too :D
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!Emotastic-chik5 Apr 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome! :hug: No problem =D
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:iconblacksnowwonderland:
The flow of this is just amazing, as is the word choice and the rhythm scheme. It's so smooth and so pleasing to read! :love:
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:icondizzymac:
Thank you. I'm glad you like it :hug:
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~AnastasiasDecember Apr 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
that's awesome... I love your word choices, and the way it rhymes. Nice work! :D
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:icondizzymac:
Thank you! Im glad you like it!

Love your signature by the way :D
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~AnastasiasDecember Apr 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!

And thanks :D
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